Monday, July 7, 2014

Letter to America

Dear America,
You have improved a lot from what you used to be, and I like that. As I learned about you in my history class, I was a disgusted  by all the inequality problems  that you had in the past.However I can see a humongous change in the society now-days. Every day we are surrounded by different races , however everyone is equal to each other,everyone has the same opportunities and rights , which is something really hard to find.When it comes to education you are one of the best countries in the world, because you give students so many opportunities and show them how important school is.Therefor I want to thank you  about giving  so many opportunities to us , and treating every person equally.                                                                
                                                              Honestly,  Denada
                                                                                      Bakiasi

3 comments:

  1. i like how you give your opinion about America and then explain why you are thanking America. Reading this blog post i was wondering if you were born in another country and learned about America there ? Many People have different views and perspectives of America, i for one think a total opposite from what you think, but its very useful to see someone elses point of view different from my own.

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  2. I like how you added the pros and cons about America. I also liked how you had many examples of what you liked and disliked.

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  3. I like how you talked about America past and its issue then you showed how America improved by connecting it to the present. I do agree with you about how America encourages people to increase their knowledge and educate themselves but i feel that America still needs more justice in other issues. Nice job!

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